According to “The Wound in the Face” by Angela Carter, images from women’s magazines give women the ideas of what beautiful faces and bodies are “supposed to be looking like.” To achieve beauty like models and celebrities, women usually waste tons of money in fixing themselves because they think their bodies are ugly and in need of a makeover. This burden is wearing heavy makeup masks to conceal their imperfect naked face, undergoing strict diets and painful plastic surgery.
In some extreme cases, women even lose their own lives.
Therefore, many people use beauty as something to deal with outer appearance in today’s world.
On the other hand, beauty could be meant as “goodness, courtesy,” and “charming” from its origins.
Thus, there’s no reason to include a dictionary definition.
For both definition essay examples, my commentary is below each paragraph.
That value is transmitted from one generation to the next by families, peers, and media in the process of enculturation.
Young children come to adapt ways of thinking and feeling about physical beauty from their families first.
For a long time, two different trends of thoughts about beauty as physical appearance as well as personality have been formed.
The above paragraph provides background information to establish the origins of the word “beauty.”By the writer defining the word’s origins, readers can better understand the current definition(s) of the word. The first and most popular interpretation of the word “beauty” is seen as outer appearance.